User contributions
4 September 2014
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Tank:R11 MS-1
(+16)
A small edit in the opening paragraph to remove word repetition and clarify one sentence.
16:50
3 September 2014
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Tank:R11 MS-1
(+210)
Mostly minor grammatical changes, such as replacing instances of "Tier" with "tier" when not at the start of a sentence. Some sentences were rewritten to remove possible bias without changing the information displayed (e.g. replacing "highly recommend doing x" with "doing x causes y, which can be beneficial"). Some sentences were rewritten to improve clarity. Link to Medium Mk I was broken, is now fixed.
04:58