User contributions
13 July 2018
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Ship:Bismarck
(-3)
01:36
11 July 2018
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Ship:Roon
(-2)
04:47
5 July 2018
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Ship:Worcester
(-1)
02:57
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Ship:Worcester
(-30)
Improved syntax and wording. Fourth and fifth paragraphs could use a bit of rewriting.
02:55