User contributions
29 March 2018
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Ship:Indianapolis
(+175)
Undo revision 272166 by [[Special:Contributions/HellaCopterRescue:na|HellaCopterRescue:na]] ([[User talk:HellaCopterRescue:na|talk]])
02:58
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Ship:Indianapolis
(-175)
1) phrase "a main battery" does not contain the correct article usage so I changed it to "the main battery" 2) The spelling of "afterwards" is a non-American variant. For consistency, I replacing it with the American English spelling. 3) The phrase flagship was missing a determiner before it so I added "the" before it. 4) The noun "Island" should was not in plural form so I added the "s" 5) "top secret" was missing a hyphen so I added it. 6) "5,000 mile" was also missing a hyphen so I added it.
02:48
28 March 2018
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Ship:Indianapolis
(+6)
1) phrase "a main battery" does not contain the correct article usage so I changed it to "the main battery"
19:40
