Renown

Corrections needed

1) Renown dosen't have submerged Torpedo Tubes, like her 3 predecessors, and the Tier 9-10 British Battalecruisers, her Torpedo Tubes are well above the waterline, and positioned near the center of the hull in groups of two and with some distance between one group and the other

2) The gun traverse is 45 seconds, so it's 15 seconds slower than Repulse, not 10

3) The ship has stronger armor compared to Repulse, not weaker, because where Repulse has her armor 152mm belt, Renown has the 38mm armor belt, which in comparison to Repulse's one is taller, Renown has also taller Torpedo Protection bulges, and her 229mm armor belt is pushed lower in the ship, making the ship citadel sit lower in the water compared to Repulse one; but it's not the only vertical protection that the citadel has, because there's also another armor belt of 51mm just on top of the citadel, and the citadel roof is much ticker compared to Repulse one being 63-76-127mm in the mid section, where Repulse has only 26mm and 89mm, but to compensate for this her the forward and aft section of the citadel roof are 102mm thick, where Repulse has nearly 150mm of armor: That is the only place where Renown armor is weaker compared to Repulse.

4) Writing this here because I'm writing here and I'm too lazy to change to another British Battlecruiser; since all this ships, starting from Indefatigable all the way to St. Vincent, are all Battlecruisers, there's no need to say that they have Battlecruiser Dispersion; of course they have it! They are Battlecruisers not Battleships.